Monday, April 30, 2012

Making an AP Lit Poetry Essay Question

The Fallen Will Forever Stand (Cameron Moll)
Prompt: Read carefully the following poem by Cameron Moll. Then write a well developed essay in which you analyze how the poet uses various literary devices to give meaning to the poem. Pay close attention to form.


Fallen.
In silence we ponder
Momentarily.
Years fail to wash away
Memories that stain the walls of yesterday.
What are They but those we revere?
Indelible is the pain
Yet greater is the courage
Of those who gave the incalculable bequest.
What are we but guardians of the legacy now ours?
Written in our hearts the memories
In perpetuity remain.
Forever
Will the Fallen
Stand.


This poem has a certain thing about it that I wanted to experiment with. I wonder if someone can figure out what that something is, and what it is called.

Wednesday, April 25, 2012

The thing no1 likes but we still have to do...no its not taxes...

The Senior Project....why art thou such a demon? I do not understand the purpose of half the things that occurred. However, I do know that portions of the project did have a reason. The resume, Mr. B's version of the presentation, and that stuff I understand. I also understand requiring people to bring in proof of applying for college or jobs. This shows that students are taking action to move on in life, past high school. The bib cards were tedious, but they did ending up being helpful to me with my topic. They worked for me after I was able to group them by topic. Everything else that was in the binder that I haven't mentioned, were tedious and often very childish tasks people did for the grade. What I think could make this better is to not make it one big thing but lots of little things. Make the project ubiquitous with classwork throughout the year and have the students place it in their in class folders. This will constantly keep the students mind ready and up for the task, whether they like it or not. It would also be cool if students were given all the guidelines and criteria and things to accomplished the beginning of the year so that they have it all when they need it the most. That time is College Application season. The research and presentation portions of the project should remain the same, however, I think it would make it easier and more efficient on the students part if they practiced it more often, than for it to be one big event. It would help with the nerves and also with consistency of understanding the material. Especially for an AP class or for students that will be taking the SAT or ACT. Being able to quickly read and analyze passages that are as boring as the hair on a meerkat's back, will enable the student to be able analyze and SAT ACT passage and formulate answers to questions faster, rather than getting confused, wasting time, and then not doing so well. This is where research and reading scholarly articles really comes in handy. There are lots of things that can be done to make this a better experience for next years students. So in conclusion, I think that the work for the senior project should be provided to the students at the beginning and be made ubiquitous with the curriculum of the class, throughout the year, and that students have the opportunities to write research papers, learn how to do them, practice, and also be able to learn how to make presentations, do presentations, etc... so that they may be more efficient at doing so when the main one, the actual senior project presentation, comes.

Monday, April 9, 2012

Dear Pip

Dear Pip,
I am a student reading your story. Honestly, I admire all the trouble that you have gone through in your life. You have worked so hard to achieve. You have reaped the rewards of an honest days work, or years rather. I do have some questions though. Why did you continue to ignore Ms. Havisham's  constant babble about breaking hearts to Estella? It makes no sense to me. The actions that you have taken quite confuse me. For money you allowed yourself to be taken away from Joe and Biddy and all the other people. That was wrong. However I do understand that it would be possible at a young age. On the other hand it is also notable how you have matured into the man that you are. I am not saying that I agree with the actions that you have taken, but rather i'm saying that you have made the choice that is deemed best for your situation. In my opinion, the basis of your life, and your life goal, seems to be the beginning of something I deem very important in the history of England itself. That one thing, was the industrial revolution. Yes, I've said it. Did not expect that did you? The journey that takes a young boy from average life, to becoming a man with a bustling life, in a bustling trade, in a bustling city. That drive right there is what makes me look up to what you have accomplished. Way to go Pip, career wise. You could have done better social wise. Fo' reel, Estella.... rlly bro? Shawty must be trippin on some hammers.
Nice meeting you, sort of. Thank you for your time, and I hope you have a good day and time, with your beloved, Estella...

Sincerely,
 A student that read what seemed like your diary...


P.S. Next time, when you hear someone telling someone else to break your heart, just walk away...
P.S.S. Don't mind the slang. It shall come into existence several decades if not centuries after your time.